Grammar correction...
2006.Jul.20, 01:27 PM
Grammar correction...
Post: #1
Quote:You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers pocketing you $10 extra.

the second "you" to "your"?
2006.Jul.20, 01:48 PM
 
Post: #2
The way it is sounds better to me but I am no grammar expert. Smile
2006.Jul.20, 02:03 PM
 
Post: #3
I would say it sounds funny either way. I would recommend going with:

"You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers, pocketing your $10 profit."?
2006.Jul.20, 02:25 PM
 
Post: #4
You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers, pocketing you an extra 10$.
2006.Jul.20, 03:45 PM
 
Post: #5
You have to realize, that page was written by a 14 year old from New Zealand. Smile I like colinmc24's version.

Zenith [2]
Game Creator and Admin
2006.Jul.20, 04:01 PM
 
Post: #6
Fixed.

Zenith [2]
Game Creator and Admin
2006.Jul.20, 06:59 PM
 
Post: #7
zenith Wrote:You have to realize, that page was written by a 14 year old from New Zealand. Smile I like colinmc24's version.

lol - wasn't trying to make fun of it, just bring it to light. Smile
2006.Jul.20, 07:45 PM
 
Post: #8
913 you are mean. Stop being so mean, you meany.
2006.Jul.20, 07:46 PM
 
Post: #9
:cry:

Zenith [2]
Game Creator and Admin
2006.Jul.20, 07:49 PM
 
Post: #10
I'm just funnin.