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2006.Jul.20, 01:27 PM

Quote:You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers pocketing you $10 extra.

the second "you" to "your"?

2006.Jul.20, 01:48 PM

The way it is sounds better to me but I am no grammar expert. Smile

2006.Jul.20, 02:03 PM

I would say it sounds funny either way. I would recommend going with:

"You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers, pocketing your $10 profit."?

2006.Jul.20, 02:25 PM

You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers, pocketing you an extra 10$.

**zenith** · 2006.Jul.20, 03:45 PM

You have to realize, that page was written by a 14 year old from New Zealand. Smile

I like colinmc24's version.

**zenith** · 2006.Jul.20, 04:01 PM

Fixed.

2006.Jul.20, 06:59 PM

zenith Wrote:You have to realize, that page was written by a 14 year old from New Zealand. I like colinmc24's version.

lol - wasn't trying to make fun of it, just bring it to light. Smile

2006.Jul.20, 07:45 PM

913 you are mean. Stop being so mean, you meany.

**zenith** · 2006.Jul.20, 07:46 PM

:cry:

2006.Jul.20, 07:49 PM

I'm just funnin.