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Grammar correction... - nineonethree - 2006.Jul.20 01:27 PM
Quote:You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers pocketing you $10 extra.
the second "you" to "your"?
- Sam I Am - 2006.Jul.20 01:48 PM
The way it is sounds better to me but I am no grammar expert.
- nineonethree - 2006.Jul.20 02:03 PM
I would say it sounds funny either way. I would recommend going with:
"You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers, pocketing your $10 profit."?
- colinmc24 - 2006.Jul.20 02:25 PM
You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers, pocketing you an extra 10$.
- zenith - 2006.Jul.20 03:45 PM
You have to realize, that page was written by a 14 year old from New Zealand.
I like colinmc24's version.
- zenith - 2006.Jul.20 04:01 PM
Fixed.
- nineonethree - 2006.Jul.20 06:59 PM
zenith Wrote:You have to realize, that page was written by a 14 year old from New Zealand.
lol - wasn't trying to make fun of it, just bring it to light.
- CouchMonkey - 2006.Jul.20 07:45 PM
913 you are mean. Stop being so mean, you meany.
- zenith - 2006.Jul.20 07:46 PM
:cry:
- CouchMonkey - 2006.Jul.20 07:49 PM
I'm just funnin.