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nineonethree

Quote:You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers pocketing you $10 extra.

the second "you" to "your"?

Sam I Am

The way it is sounds better to me but I am no grammar expert. Smile

nineonethree

I would say it sounds funny either way. I would recommend going with:

"You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers, pocketing your $10 profit."?

colinmc24

You bet $5 and won $15 by lining up 2 numbers, pocketing you an extra 10$.
You have to realize, that page was written by a 14 year old from New Zealand. Smile I like colinmc24's version.
Fixed.

nineonethree

zenith Wrote:You have to realize, that page was written by a 14 year old from New Zealand. Smile I like colinmc24's version.

lol - wasn't trying to make fun of it, just bring it to light. Smile

CouchMonkey

913 you are mean. Stop being so mean, you meany.
:cry:

CouchMonkey

I'm just funnin.
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