Error is description
2006.Aug.04, 07:08 AM
Error is description
Post: #1
Defiance T-350 Shotgun has an error in the description: With the faster firing rate of the T-250, strength and endurance is also required.
It should be either
With the faster firing rate of the T350, strength and endurance is also required.
or:
With a faster firing rate than the T250, strength and endurance is also required.
2006.Aug.04, 07:56 AM
 
Post: #2
or just change "is" to "are"
2006.Aug.04, 09:51 AM
 
Post: #3
Oddjob is correct that the is should be replaced with are in both of my alternate suggestions. Just changing the are will not fix the description though.
2006.Aug.04, 11:27 AM
 
Post: #4
Perhaps this suggestion could be included, as an example . With a faster firing rate, the T350 requires greater strength and endurance. :wink:
2006.Aug.04, 01:36 PM
 
Post: #5
Once again colinmc24 wins again with another grammar correction Smile. I'll chance it as soon as I can get on a computer (on my phone now!!).

Zenith [2]
Game Creator and Admin
2006.Aug.06, 01:14 AM
 
Post: #6
Or:

With a faster firing rate, the T350 requires Lupar Koor to operate it.