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Error is description - Lostangel - 2006.Aug.04 07:08 AM
Defiance T-350 Shotgun has an error in the description: With the faster firing rate of the T-250, strength and endurance is also required.
It should be either
With the faster firing rate of the T350, strength and endurance is also required.
or:
With a faster firing rate than the T250, strength and endurance is also required.
- oddjob - 2006.Aug.04 07:56 AM
or just change "is" to "are"
- Lostangel - 2006.Aug.04 09:51 AM
Oddjob is correct that the is should be replaced with are in both of my alternate suggestions. Just changing the are will not fix the description though.
- colinmc24 - 2006.Aug.04 11:27 AM
Perhaps this suggestion could be included, as an example . With a faster firing rate, the T350 requires greater strength and endurance. :wink:
- zenith - 2006.Aug.04 01:36 PM
Once again colinmc24 wins again with another grammar correction
. I'll chance it as soon as I can get on a computer (on my phone now!!).
- LuparKoor - 2006.Aug.06 01:14 AM
Or:
With a faster firing rate, the T350 requires Lupar Koor to operate it.