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Lostangel

Defiance T-350 Shotgun has an error in the description: With the faster firing rate of the T-250, strength and endurance is also required.
It should be either
With the faster firing rate of the T350, strength and endurance is also required.
or:
With a faster firing rate than the T250, strength and endurance is also required.

oddjob

or just change "is" to "are"

Lostangel

Oddjob is correct that the is should be replaced with are in both of my alternate suggestions. Just changing the are will not fix the description though.

colinmc24

Perhaps this suggestion could be included, as an example . With a faster firing rate, the T350 requires greater strength and endurance. :wink:
Once again colinmc24 wins again with another grammar correction Smile. I'll chance it as soon as I can get on a computer (on my phone now!!).

LuparKoor

Or:

With a faster firing rate, the T350 requires Lupar Koor to operate it.
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