[filthymick]

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This is what it says when i try to reply to this...

http://forums.awakenedlands.com/thread-19995.html

Which if you check, you will see ive already replied to.

[Maccleod]

I moved it to gang recruitment section, as that's where it belongs.
You can't reply in that section.

[filthymick]

Totally killed the convo tho now i forgot what we were talking about in the first place

[benzon]

Love, war, poetry, ponies...
The big questions of life, you know

[filthymick]

A haiku inspired by hellraiser

This small box of brass
What suffering lies within
I must open you

[benzon]

(2017.May.30 08:55 PM)filthymick Wrote:  A haiku inspired by hellraiser

This small box of brass
What suffering lies within
I must open you

Edges, sides, patterns
Can't think of anything else
Did that cube find me?

[filthymick]

Chains, hooks, knives, razors
Lives, teeth, eyes, sabers
Flesh, skin, bones, brittle
Fear, pain, sin, wimper

you've opened the box
And we have come

Such sights we have to show you

[benzon]

Away from the 17. Is this still some haiku form or a different type of poetry?

(is this going to be.moved to off topic or should we open a thread there ourselves?)

[filthymick]

I guess something else. Idk much about dif poetry types

[IamAWolf]

It looks like a hook.